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Немного творчества...

Солнышко садится низко-низко,

Я уже часов на наблюдаю

За моим окном летели  птицы

Унесли любовь, а я не знала... 

Солнышко садится низко-низко,

Горизонт лишь краской наполняет

За моим окном утихли птицы, 

Я тебя сегодня потеряла

В жизни так бывает часто-часто,

Ошибаясь истину находишь

Я в руке сжимаю свое счастья,

Ведь оно на свете всех дороже.

В жизни так бывает часто-часто,

По ночам от боли просыпаюсь

В мир воспоминаний и желаний

Следом за тобою улетаю...

P. S. Всем кому нравится или не нравится мой мини стих прошу высказатся! Это даст мне толчек для раздумий и развития!!! Мне очень нужно ваше мнение:) СПАСИБО



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Красивые слова!!! Разве важно нравится кому-то, или нет? Главное, в стихотворениях - искренние чувства! Стихи пишут, не для кого-то, а о ком-то, о себе, о прошлом и о будущем, про свои переживания и грёзы! Не переживай - у Тебя получается!!!

Спасибочки!!!))) Я так и делаю, пишу о том, что у меня в душе! Просто было интересно мнения окружающих:)
мягко и ласково написано... А главное-душевно... Но не стоит на етом заморачиваться,-переживания ето часть емоционального состояния которое мы не можем спрятать.. Мы можем лишь его пережить
Спасибо Метеорчик!!!
Ничего себе мини-стихи.Целый час читал.(добавь немного эротизма)
Просто у меня есть творения и подлиней! Эротизм как-то добавлю
Неймовірно!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Я захоплена!!!!!!!
Дуже-дуже дякую!!!!!!! Я зворушена до сліз!!!!!!!
Душевно,красиво...(чуть -чуть рифму подправить ...) замечательно. (МНЕНИЕ)
Спасибо огромное
а може варто трохи позитивніше?? (імхо)
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